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雅思考试|雅思写作的“七项基本原则”b

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5、 多实少虚原则 缘由非常简单,写文章还是应该写一些实质的东西,不要空话连篇。这就需要必须要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。譬如大家说一个非常不错的时候,不应该之说nice如此空洞的词,应该用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再譬如: 走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room 但小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room 小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room 孩子走出房间应该说:dance out of the room 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room 所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩! 6、 多变句式原则 1)加法(串联) 都期望写下非常长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,如何解决,最保险的写长句的办法就是这类,可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。譬如说: I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar. 若是二者并列的,大家可以用一个超级句式: Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. 其它的短语可以用: besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover 2)转折(旁敲侧击) 批评某人缺点的时候,大家总习惯先旁敲侧击说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方法虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还很容易叫人同意。所以呢,大家说话的时候,只须在要素之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次已经足够。 The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition. The coat was thin, but it was warm. 更多的短语: despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding 3)因果(so, so, so) 昨天在街上我看到了一个女生,然后我主动搭讪,然后大家去咖啡馆,然后大家认识了,然后大家成为了朋友可见,讲故事的时候大家总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得非常容易见到了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系! The snow began to fall, so we went home. 更多短语: then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that 4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重) 有的人脑袋大,身体小,或者有的人脑袋小,身体大,虽然大家不期望长成这个样子,可假如真的是如此了,也就势必会吸引其他人的注意力。文章中假如出现如此的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子独一无二。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。 举例:This is what I can do. Whether he can go with us or not is not sure. 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分: When to go, Why he goes away 5)附加(画蛇添足) 假如有了老婆,总会遇见这种情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,假如把老婆的话插入到大家的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。 The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine. I dont enjoy that book you are reading. Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going. 其实非常简单,同位语--要讲解的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句借用之前的关键字并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但whom or that 关键字需要要紧跟在先行词之前。 6)排比(排山倒海句) 文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,假如非要叫你的文章愈加精彩的话,那样我期望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,这样表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势! Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you. Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides. We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏) 要想写出这样气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可! 7、 挑战极限原则 既然是挑战极限,势必是比较难的,但并不是不可攀! 原理:在学生的文章中,极少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也非常简单,只须花上5分钟的时间看看就能领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词需要主语一致,而独立主格则不然。譬如: The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills. Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China. 假如你可一些出如此的句子,不能高分才怪!


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